Hello, I need help with my current essay. I submitted my draft but my instructor

Hello,
I need help with my current essay. I submitted my draft but my instructor

Hello,
I need help with my current essay. I submitted my draft but my instructor commented and advised below what I needed to work on.
*MLA Style
*Use Same Work Cited in Draft for resources
*Draft attached
Please implement the below corrections
“I would recommend that you work on using strategies to meet the needs of an audience, including an introduction with relevant background information that appeals to the audience and a conclusion that summarizes key points and includes a call to action for the audience.
 
Thus, you used persuasive writing techniques in the body of the essay, including using ethos, pathos, or logos to persuade the audience when addressing and refuting an opposing while using attribution conventions throughout the essay.
“You did not include intext citations everywhere that was needed. The intext citations that you did use were not formatted correctly. 
 
You did use quotes and/or paraphrases to integrate evidence from research into the persuasive essay but did not cite them correctly. You should also include intext citations where needed. Anytime that you use information from a source you should use intext citations to give credit to the author”

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